Moment #11 – Tassajara

Sitting on the bridge
Foot steps quietly passing
The river flows on

2 Comments

  1. scott constable July 28, 2010 at 4:49 pm

    love it! but does ‘quietly’ have just 2 syllables in australian?

    Reply

    1. Donald July 28, 2010 at 5:09 pm

      Damn. The haiku Kempeitai are on to me!
      I edited my humble efforts.
      Thank you, Sensei

      Reply

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